mojomojo
Go deep enough, and there is a bedrock of truth, however hard.
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Post by mojomojo on Mar 3, 2015 21:03:07 GMT
Waters run, majestic and pure, shimmering dance, of natures soul, in its power, all is held, life or death, it all depends,
Listen, deeply, You will hear, Her, serenading, You, to come near,
Though playful at heart, A dark side resides, Seek favour, with the spirit, Of rivers and tides
Two sides to her nature, She oft, does hide, At her pleasure, Death or survive,
Her smile astounds, Beauty, beyond words, Her presence surrounds, All taken souls,
Under, her charm, Time stands still, Forget to return, At your, peril,
Those that linger, Will often find, Their, last breath spent, In the watery divide,
Do not, despise, The watery Queen, For tis, her beauty that captures, The living being,
Respect her domain, Honour her ways, Enter with diligence, To leave the same day.
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Post by tribunalofmercy on Mar 4, 2015 0:20:29 GMT
Wow - Did you write this Robert? If you did Not I sure can't find it anywhere...very poetic of you, very well-written What's got you thinking about English spiritual history today?
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mojomojo
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Post by mojomojo on Mar 4, 2015 8:57:20 GMT
I don't feel, I have a right to claim any of them, Mary Anne, They just come without effort, First time it happened, I could see the words slowly spiralling down right in front of my forehead, I just had to put it on paper. Happens mostly, when walking through the park, yesterday the river was running very strong and out came Belisama, Problem is trying to remember it all, until I get home. Yes, I could carry a notebook, but that brings intent into the equation.
Spiritual history, O, no, not another avenue to explore, LOL.
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Post by aceofcups on Mar 4, 2015 21:43:33 GMT
Hi Robert,
Great inspired poem.... and love how you describe how you get poem images and words ...
peace aceofcups
PS, Must be the Sign of Pisces ( neptune/pisces which rules poetry persay) we are traveling thru now cause I also got a poem this week,,, ( has been a kind of dry spell for me for a while about writing poetry lately).
Not as good as yours Robert,,, but let me post it here:
Climbing Up a Waterfall
Where do sounds go after they leave our ears?
Subtle sounds wafting through forest foliage, leaves rustling rippling sounds of waves floating by slowly passing – then speed-ed up from gusts of whipped up winds.
Water washing over rocks – do the rocks listen? does the water know it’s water the trees, know they are trees?
Does us knowing we can hear distance us from listening - or awaken our sense of being present ?
Does a waterfall know it’s falling or has it learned to gracefully except it before it cascades and comes crashing down upon the moving stream below?
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mojomojo
Go deep enough, and there is a bedrock of truth, however hard.
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Post by mojomojo on Mar 5, 2015 18:32:36 GMT
Yes, must be something in the air, Ace, I love the theme you have running through, I know we spoke of the power of words before, But do they get amplified in poetry, or is that just me. How man has used nature and the elements to express GOD, all down through the ages, Leads me to think, we be far older than we realise.
Thanks, Robert.
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chris86
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Post by chris86 on Mar 5, 2015 19:56:48 GMT
Here is a poem i wrote last year on facebook, its not much but i tryed to word out how i feel and where i seemed to find myself
There was pain, and there was love, and sure i gained this from above, Now there's love and pain is weak, love will make us surley speak, Here i speak from down in the dark, all i give is my lovely heart, Lovely hearts sing so loud, i feel my feet apon the ground.
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Post by aceofcups on Mar 5, 2015 21:15:47 GMT
HI Robert,
to me poems have a way of connecting to the Higher Self/Mind, the archetypical symbolic level of consciousness beyond the rational mind at times. And when it really works to me,, it takes place in a Present Moment consciousness. Higher self inspired... no?
That doesn't always mean that it is also not good to look at it later at another present moment and do any tweaking to it now that its is in conscious written form.
To me we are inherently connected to the Core which some people call God.. so we are the oldest along with the newest,,, it is always relative but connected to me.
peace
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Post by Bartholomew on Mar 11, 2015 22:52:51 GMT
Waters run, majestic and pure, shimmering dance, of natures soul, in its power, all is held, life or death, it all depends, Listen, deeply, You will hear, Her, serenading, You, to come near, Though playful at heart, A dark side resides, Seek favour, with the spirit, Of rivers and tides Two sides to her nature, She oft, does hide, At her pleasure, Death or survive, Her smile astounds, Beauty, beyond words, Her presence surrounds, All taken souls, Under, her charm, Time stands still, Forget to return, At your, peril, Those that linger, Will often find, Their, last breath spent, In the watery divide, Do not, despise, The watery Queen, For tis, her beauty that captures, The living being, Respect her domain, Honour her ways, Enter with diligence, To leave the same day. I like it. Well done.
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