kkandle USA Guest
|  | MORNING TASKS original poetry USA « Thread Started on Apr 9, 2007, 1:14am » | |
Dew drops grace green grasses soothing like my pearly power shower i choose the right outfit for an orange day under the fruit bowl by Vincent Van Gogh breakfast barstool welcomes hungry hips honey dew morning juice kiss lavendar lips pray meditate talk to God and self water plants feed pets sweep stony steps thunderous thud at french door blue genes deliver the paperboy who always smells like molasses busy red rush for beige boisterous bus cool car pool to trendy train that passes helium houses empty again until 6:10 wise bald eagle relaxes on top of world his seat red white blue flag pole of gold sun is ball fire rolling uphill fate early flights climb sky over Water Lilly Lake soon to give chase with sun rays tatooing shapes open wings feathers feasting good morning. original poetry
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sparklekaz Guest
|  | Re: MORNING TASKS original poetry USA « Reply #1 on Apr 9, 2007, 11:49am » | |
Hi KKandle,
I love your poetry..its sassy..
No seriously, its great..love to hear more of it.
Love and light Kaz
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|  | Re: MORNING TASKS original poetry USA « Reply #2 on Apr 9, 2007, 12:08pm » | |
hehe keep posting them i like them lol i never use to create poetry of my own till i came to this site guess i didnt have the confidence to show others that side of me but now ive started i cant stop lol and your poetry is very nice to read thank you for sharing with us your lovely work next we will have art coming in here lol thats not me i dont do art hehehehe
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still learning thanks kkandle Guest
|  | Re: MORNING TASKS original poetry USA « Reply #3 on Apr 10, 2007, 12:28am » | |
karen wow i like your work as well...as i said this poetry stuff is my outlet and kinda my teething ring, till i really get to what God intends 4 me to do. Please share more of your work.
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|  | Re: MORNING TASKS original poetry USA « Reply #4 on Apr 11, 2007, 8:56am » | |
Nice poem, you really usd a lot of alliteration in this one! It is a good use of a literary tool, as it gives the poem a good rhythm. 
Don't worry, I'm not always this technical!
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