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kkandle USA
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« Thread Started on Apr 9, 2007, 1:14am »

Dew drops grace green grasses
soothing like my pearly power shower
i choose the right outfit for an orange day
under the fruit bowl by Vincent Van Gogh
breakfast barstool welcomes hungry hips
honey dew morning juice kiss lavendar lips
pray meditate talk to God and self
water plants feed pets sweep stony steps
thunderous thud at french door
blue genes deliver the paperboy
who always smells like molasses
busy red rush for beige boisterous bus
cool car pool to trendy train that passes
helium houses empty again until 6:10
wise bald eagle relaxes on top of world
his seat red white blue flag pole of gold
sun is ball fire rolling uphill fate
early flights climb sky over Water Lilly Lake
soon to give chase with sun rays tatooing shapes
open wings feathers feasting good morning.
original poetry
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« Reply #1 on Apr 9, 2007, 11:49am »

Hi KKandle,

I love your poetry..its sassy.. :)

No seriously, its great..love to hear more of it.

Love and light
Kaz
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« Reply #2 on Apr 9, 2007, 12:08pm »

hehe keep posting them i like them lol i never use to create poetry of my own till i came to this site guess i didnt have the confidence to show others that side of me but now ive started i cant stop lol and your poetry is very nice to read thank you for sharing with us your lovely work next we will have art coming in here lol thats not me i dont do art hehehehe
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still learning thanks kkandle
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« Reply #3 on Apr 10, 2007, 12:28am »

karen wow i like your work as well...as i said this poetry stuff is my outlet and kinda my teething ring, till i really get to what God intends 4 me to do. Please share more of your work. :D
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« Reply #4 on Apr 11, 2007, 8:56am »

Nice poem, you really usd a lot of alliteration in this one! It is a good use of a literary tool, as it gives the poem a good rhythm. :)

Don't worry, I'm not always this technical!
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